tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1327508030936221619.post8733377892137153321..comments2011-01-01T22:47:18.531-06:00Comments on Mad Poet Files: MPF 1-01 - Frosty's DepositZachhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05382876506038066469noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1327508030936221619.post-26431763912454611722010-01-12T09:39:31.488-06:002010-01-12T09:39:31.488-06:00Wonderful story Zack. I plan on following all your...Wonderful story Zack. I plan on following all your podcasts. <br /><br />You mentioned, this is practice...can I make some observations? Too bad, I'm making them anyway.<br /><br />I appreciated your comments about Hurley after the story. I missed that he was a decorated war hero, in the story.<br /><br />One thing that hit me right off, that didn't get resolved in my mind, was that Frosty was on a space station, where he would be 'going home'. I picture a space station as being enclosed, with levels, and apartments, like Nathan Lowells. I thought going home could be, going back to the apartment, but at the end you mention a 'guy in the car with the detonator'. I was hoping you would show us how you would have a car and a home on a space station. Maybe in the future.<br /><br />I thought there was a POV shift to Hurley at one point in the bank. I didn't go back to relisten, I could be wrong.<br /><br />I hope to hear more about High Moon, since you mentioned it. I loved that story.<br /><br />You're my Hero, man. Keep up the good work. I'll keep listening.<br /><br />Philip/NorvaljoeNorvaljoehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08613908443201549809noreply@blogger.com