Welcome to the 2nd half of the story. I'll try to consolidate these in the future, which means I need to get writing earlier in the process. Good news is that I'm working on a collaboration RIGHT NOW with Scott Roche, of the Archangel podcast. Of course, I don't know if that will appear here but...
Anyway, here's the rest of the story of Alexander, Markus, Ragnar, and Fabius. Hope you enjoy it!
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Zach, my biggest complaint would be that you keep saying that you are terrible with titles. I think that you do just about as good as everyone else with that so...stop saying that. I really liked the flow of the story and the way that this particular story segways into future works. I would like a bit more background on the people involved so that some of the characters aren't just pieces of plastic on the field, but that can be taken care of in the next installment.hint hint. Overall, in my opinion, your writing is quite good and I look forward to more stuff.
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